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Pestering Patina by ~malicent:iconmalicent:





::Pestering Patina::

Sometimes the comfort of a lost crime is salted to be swallowed
Like fishing through mindspace
Hopping between these unnamed streets
I listened to the drums
I glared upon the white noise that abandoned it's quality
Chose it's own coloures
And I do now live in a pixelated bank note
What isn't of worth can always be bought
And that thing we call what we feel
Exchanged without value

The patina that comes from my excited self
Pestering my uncontrolled self-laid traps
I didn't fall at all this isn't pessimism
It's just me exhausted from simpleton mindplay
Like predicting the rows of polka dots
Sleep inducing task

And I miss the old patina

Of rounding mosaic piles
Of listening to the beats and sounds made from the heart
Of having the best fucking meal made by another
Or the patina of chance at all cost and honour at all crusaders
When the average day dithered between breaking and mending
When the patina shook like the cover fabric of speakers
How I miss my patina...the beautiful kind
©2004-2009 ~malicent
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Author's Comments

Pestering - to bother
Patina - glow, sheen...gleaming happiness

You all sucked and ruled in your own way. I guess not only sunshine makes one grow, sadly.

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:iconspecialcase:
oh :/

sounds bad

:hug:

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:iconprayerposition17:
Insane writing talent. Beautiful poetry you've got.
:iconekynus:
Amazing. Your descriptions are excellent and the voice really helps with the conveyed emotions. This writing really calms me.. something about the dictation is soothing..

+fav

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:iconeriboss:
I can see something... its layed out infront of me, and I can see it, yet the early days of aquantence and overwhelming optimism holds me back from question. I'm intrigued yet forced to the side by these potent feelings that I have no right to disect and comment, to praise or critique. This face in a million wants to delve deeper... to understand, but is made hesitant by that old chesnut social etiquette and fear of perceived premature over-enthusiasm.

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:iconmalicent:
awwww :hug:

i'm a bit confused, but confused is good right?:)
:iconeriboss:
eheh yeah sorry bout that.. but yus i confused is good hehehe :D

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:iconmaxsterling:
you are beautiful in body and mind.
keep up the great work

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Life is what you make but yet life makes you; so my question is if life's hell, what'cha gonna do?
:iconprayerposition17:
Wow if I only knew bigger words...:(

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